I love the whimsical title to this tale of when the world was made. You're a real talent. . .keep posting! We want more!
Mar 12, 2008 - 06:16 PM PST
dex2988
dexalee
what's up lakeland!
Mar 11, 2008 - 07:33 PM PST
alaslostlast
My god you have Hope...
Feb 29, 2008 - 12:01 AM PST
Nbleak21
dexalee
Not today.
Tomorrow,
Maybe.
Feb 03, 2008 - 08:31 PM PST
SuperDave531
dexalee
Haaayy another local :) howdy!
Jan 14, 2008 - 02:53 AM PST
double_a
Very well written. You write like you mean it, instead of trying. VERY nicely done.
Dec 21, 2007 - 05:29 PM PST
Brunkster
Damn, you've got some depth to you. Explore it.
Dec 20, 2007 - 11:37 PM PST
Leviathon
yes 3rd line is my fav too.
Dec 20, 2007 - 11:35 PM PST
Leviathon
wow. i like this and i dont know why.
Dec 20, 2007 - 02:16 AM PST
ckwright
dexalee
No problem, I like to encourage people to write and do things that move them. Having your work be personal makes it even more relevant to you and you shouldn't be scared of such things. Keep up the good work.
A new community for artists and creative minds - and a new
Internet series from Marshall Herskovitz and Edward Zwick, the creative minds behind "My So-Called Life" and "Blood Diamond."
We must misbehave-
and often when it rains,
our colours mix
and we become like trees
our bodies fixed, concave.
We unravel
melt
become undone,
or perhaps more permanent
our faces fossils of the sun,
our shadows heavensent.
Music
,Paperplain,Cold War Kids,Taken By Trees,Beirut,
Film
,Gone With The Wind,It's a Wonderful Life,Beau Brummel,
Books
,Dessen,Austen,Salinger,Green,Dickinson,RR Martin,Vonnegut,Baudelaire,Emerson,Twain,Whitman,Crane,Swift,Blake,Mitchell,Gough,
Artists
,Dali,Kahlo,Peter Max,Chuck Close,Botticelli,Waterhouse,Pini,Rockwell,Matisse,Toulouse Lautrec,Herring,