"Fight the Pain"

Apr 24, 2008 - 17:59 PM PST
So this is a poem i had to write for my english class...some say it is a little dark for me but i was in a bad mood and in a lot of pain (i got my braces tightned and my knee hurt). But i still liked it so im going to post it.

"Fight the Pain"
When the Dark Angel throws you down
Do you get back up
Or just stay down?
Some would easily choose the latter,
They believe their lives don't really matter.
Leaving behind friends, family, lives, and trust
All seemingly worthless
Dissolve to dust.

But some of us get back up
The Strong,the Brave, the Tough
Rise to face the rough
To fight
In a battle where only with your innermost Light
Can you hope to prevail
Though are prepared to fail
And thus you find
You are inclined
To Wonder:
Where does the suffering end?

So, i hope you guys like it...

chipmunk

"Fight the Pain"

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Apr 30, 2008 - 08:21 AM

jadebug

I like it, doesn't seem too dark to me...hmmmm