A little something I wrote pt.2

Apr 07, 2008 - 21:21 PM PST
A blood-chilling cry rang through the building. Madalyn's eyes slowly opened. What is going on now? She is so weak, it is so utterly pathetic. She shut her eyes in contempt.
The scream continued to pierce throughout the house.
Madalyn sat upright with restrained curiosity. This isn't Celia, it's Agatha. Good ol'Aggie. Something is wrong.
Beneath the deafing cry, padded footsteps swiftly ran down the hallway before his prey's sisters formed to protect their own lives.

Okay, so it isn't the best thing I ever wrote and it took some time to get the wording right. I hope it makes sense. lol Leave comments below and be sure to rate it!

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A little something I wrote pt.2


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Apr 12, 2008 - 11:31 AM

xxbookworm on
I like the language you used,
very vivid.
:]
Apr 07, 2008 - 21:34 PM

MEOutLoud on
I like it! :)