for the girl i strangely wanted

Feb 27, 2008 - 10:15 AM PST
when on thy features subtly rest my gaze
daring for an instant to dream divine
wishing for a moment your hands in mine
destined to write instead such desperate phrase
as the stars that light the sky do ye lay
most gently rolling waves that lap the beach
replacing words with staves that music speaks
such bright night from your eyes can i embrace

had life no rules or love potent sting
as roses sigh in the silent shadow
basking in the mystery of twilight
the stillness broken to let me sing
the prose so shy in the stars quiet glow
I would burst through walls to have you tonight

for the girl i strangely wanted


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Jul 16, 2008 - 23:44 PM

christi1695 on
wow i really like this i think it is very pretty i like the last line its so foward
Feb 29, 2008 - 20:46 PM

princess_star on
if i'm that girl i would deffinitely fall for you... your words are so deep that it could melt her heart ;-) and well love is surely strange sometimes...
Feb 27, 2008 - 13:18 PM

wenz on
well provo's pretty close to park city, you should experience it haha.

this is really moving, by the way. i read it once and then want to read it all over again
Feb 27, 2008 - 13:17 PM

Hils1391 on
I really like it. but why the title? the girl you strangely wanted?