Areulder | Friendswood, TX  • United States , Age 17
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Just Listen, for once!



Sep 22, 2008 - 19:48 PM PST

Hide and seek
Where we used to meet
With someone else
But I still feel alone
No ones sitting here
Please take the seat
I've been waiting
For us to meet

Wait for me
Wait for me here
She said to love her
Forever more

Under the street light
Soaked from the rain
You cried on my shoulder
And I walked away
Get your heart straight
Because your mouth is moving
Just try
Give it your best shot and try
Before its too late

I've stopped myself from saying
What I truly feel
All I want
Is just to heal
For once

Title: Just Listen, for once!
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Added: 09-22-2008
Channel: Poetry
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Nov 05, 2008 - 15:57 PM
This is good; the feelings jump of the page. I like how you get down to the core of what you're trying to say basing more on the feeling not the imagery.

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