buriedinlove | Eugene, OR  • United States , Age 18

My Floor Experience



Mar 19, 2008 - 17:42 PM PST

I find my self just lying on my floor….
Wondering why I am alive
What am I doing?

Could I be insane…
Could one word explain my troubles

I feel like the whole world is expecting something from me
Like I'm on a dead line
Do I have nothing to show for my whole existence

I do something good
Nobody care's
I'm just left there
To fend for my self

Who am I?
What am I?
Why am I here?

Title: My Floor Experience
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Added: 03-19-2008
Channel: Mind
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Apr 10, 2008 - 06:42 AM
I liked the questioning feel to this piece. I also liked the use of shorter lines in certain places to emphasize your questions. Good work :)

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