xxbookworm | Parkville, MD  • United States , Age 18

My Mind



Mar 23, 2008 - 10:18 AM PST

My mind is cluttered
like a room filled with junk
like a closet stuffed full with the clothes and toys that once lay strewn upon the floor
only my mind is filled
filled with ideas
thoughts and random factoids
what some might call meaningless details of the past
Although, one thought stands out from the bunch
that thought is the thought of you
An image of you standing in my room
leaning against something
How very James Dean of you.
Your expression is priceless
Brown eyes sparkling in the light
So deep and soulful
your smile creeping out from behind your pale pink lips
Oh, How that smile gets to me
It's infectious and instinct kicks in
I smile back
I long for that moment when your
chocolate brown eyes
those gorgeous eyes
lock with my pathetic hazels
These images are nice and all
but what do your actions mean?
Oh, How they confuse me so!
Do you feel the same way or are you just a nice guy?
Those bittersweet confusing thoughts
swim through my mind as well







Comments please? :]

Title: My Mind
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Added: 03-23-2008
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Apr 02, 2008 - 07:32 AM
The last ten lines are the best of the poem, perhaps even a poem on their own. I particularly like the phrase "pathetic hazels."

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