rabidplatypus | Hilliard, OH  • United States , Age 24

one night's mistake part four



May 15, 2008 - 22:43 PM PST

So I have been a bit absent from this story and I thought if I was ever going to finish I should start. Like before I would like any feed back good or bad.

Part One
Part Two
Part Three

"To the window (TO THE WINDOW), to the wall, (TO THE WALL) To the sweat drop down my balls (MY BALLS) To all these bitches crawl (CRAWL)", Today's wonderful alarm clock courtesy of the girl in the room next to Karly. Looking up Allen saw the clock reading 7:10.
“Hey I am going to go back to my place and shower and I’ll meet you here just before eight so we can go to the clinic.” He said as he gently crawled out from under Karly on the couch.
“I think I’ll go without you.” She responded.
“Okay whatever you think is best, but make sure you find me afterwards.” The words came out in a voice that was almost hurt by her choice to go alone. The bodyguard/human pillow was now set free to concern himself with anything but Karly.
Walking in his room he found him roommate standing in front of the body length mirror in his anything but modest man panties admiring his own body. Jeff not phased by his roommate walking on him continues forming his body builder poses. Allen thinks to himself that he has never known any so much in love with their own body. Jeff of course thinks of himself as God’s Gift to women.
“Where were you last night man? Did you get some pussy?” The wannabe beefcake jokingly questioned.
“No I did not get some last night.” The sore Allen replied. That couch was not the best thing to sleep on. Grabbing his shower supplies he wanted nothing more than to get away from the almost naked man talking about sex.
“Man the other night I had some sweet ass.” Bellowed Jeff the Insensitive.
“That’s nice.” Allen said rushing out of the room.

* * *

Walking into the clinic Karly attempted to hide her face from anyone that might know her. It was only a half an hour after the clinic had opened and there were already half a dozen people in the waiting room. She stood there at the door for a second as a rush of reality hit her. She could be pregnant. How had she not thought of this until now. She was too young, her parents would disown her, how would she finish school?
“Do you have an appointment!” the woman behind the counter asked loud enough that everyone in the waiting room looked up to see the next student who was there for some unknown aliment. This woman’s question brought Karly out of the frightening possibility that was stuck in her head.
“No.” meekly replying.
“What is your reason for coming to the clinic today?”
“I am not feeling well.”
“Did you drink last night? It might just be a hangover and there is nothing the doctor can do for you.” The secretary explained, as if that was a common response to her personal question.
“No it is not a hangover, I know what those are like and this is different.”
“Okay, name please.”
“Karly Mendez”
“Karly take a seat and I will call you when the doctor is ready to see you.” Quickly Karly found a seat in the corner and grabbed a copy of Women’s Health from the table of outdated magazines. The waiting room was quite, no one talked, no one made intentional eye contact. It was like they all had some hidden reason for being there. After what seemed like an eternity her name was finally called. She was shown to a room and told the doctor would soon be there. Twenty minutes later the doctor came in and to Karly’s relief the doctor was a woman.
“So Karly it says here that you are not feeling well today what exactly doesn’t feel right?” The kindly doctor asked.
“Well I actually feel fine, but I need to have some tests done.”
“What kind of tests?”
“STDs and a pregnancy test.”
“Okay when did you last have sex?”
“The only time was two days ago.” Feeling that she needed to establish that this was her first time.
“Okay are you on birth control?”
“No.”
“Did he wear a condom?”
“I don’t know.”
“Okay well it is too soon to do a pregnancy test. It would most likely come up negative this soon after having sex. As for STDs unfortunately many of those tests will not test positive for a few months. So I can not do the test as of now. But I can offer you Plan B.”
“What is that?” She had no idea what this doctor was talking about.
“It is a pill that will stop pregnancy from happening. I can write you a prescription for it.”
“Oh no I am Catholic, I don’t believe abortion is right.”
“This is not the abortion pill. It will stop the pregnancy before it starts, if you are already pregnant it will not harm the fetus.” Calmly explaining to the girl who was now upset thinking that an abortion was being offered.
“So it wont kill a baby?”
“No. Would you like me to write you the prescription?”
“Yes.” reluctantly saying, still feeling that this may not be any better than an abortion.
“Okay I would like to see you in a week or two, just to be safe and do a pregnancy test. And we can talk then about possible STDs tests.” Writing on her note pad the Plan B prescription. “One last question before you go.”
“Yeah.” Wondering what this question might be and a little frightened to hear it.
“Were you raped?”

© 2008 Aaron Kuhns

Title: one night's mistake part four
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