runhidewrite | San Diego, CA  • United States , Age 21
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Puzzles



Apr 01, 2008 - 21:40 PM PST

I sit by the window
in your favorite hour
when I wear no makeup
and my hair is pulled back
from my face
and unwashed

I brought you here
to this morning
because I’m afraid
you’re alone
in the darkness of
your still winter’s bed

I know
I’m being selfish
to keep you here
after your time
but your morning tea
is losing warmth
and your daily crossword
from the paper
isn’t going to solve itself


Title: Puzzles
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Added: 04-01-2008
Channel: Writing
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Apr 05, 2008 - 18:01 PM
I didnt get ths the first time I read it...but i read it again and i got it and something in my brain clicked....wow, i thought, this is really good

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