grokme | New Canaan, CT  • United States , Age 19
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Short Story: Fallen in the Rye



Dec 22, 2007 - 07:31 AM PST

Here's a fiction short story that I wrote for a creative writing class I'm taking. The piece is teenager like, angsty, and very Catcher in the Rye-esque (thus the name Fallen in the Rye). Anyway, if anyone reads this please drop me a line. Thanks.

Title: Short Story: Fallen in the Rye
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Added: 12-22-2007
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Jan 07, 2008 - 21:01 PM
I think you could go a little deeper into the plot, but that's not to say this wasn't interesting. In fact, I really liked this story. It's rare that I can sit and read things that people my own age have written and not get bored a paragraph into it. I was drawn into your character, and could relate easily. Great job.

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