BLA | Jamaica Plain, MA  • United States , Age 19

The Perfect Someone...?



Mar 12, 2008 - 21:10 PM PST

Swimming in my sea of confusion
I’m still as a statue, screaming
As the winds ravage my feet and breast

I sea people. They sea me.
We could grasp hands, but
We snatch shields instead

Fumbling to hold them in place
We duck away from each other
Diving under cover all a shudder

Then (s)he comes along
Together we prop each other’s up
Now more stable than alone.
Our defenses stronger; our walls higher.

Title: The Perfect Someone...?
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Added: 03-12-2008
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Apr 08, 2008 - 17:35 PM
Then (s)he comes along
Together we prop each other’s up
Now more stable than alone.
Our defenses stronger; our walls higher.

*now thats poetry*

Apr 04, 2008 - 16:54 PM
A whole love scene plays in your head when reading this...kind of like that scene from Titanic. Good stuff man.

Apr 04, 2008 - 16:49 PM
nice word choice and good visuals

Mar 26, 2008 - 13:10 PM
Love it!!! :)

Mar 24, 2008 - 16:43 PM
I like it. Good work :)

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