yoriel | Wooster, OH  • United States , Age 18
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Where are these bipeds going?



Mar 21, 2008 - 18:56 PM PST

Metalic Throb
By: Yoriel Segura

Gears Metal Gears Knobs
Gears Metal Gears Cogs
Metal Bearing Metal Infinite
Metal Tearing Metal Pandemic
Production Growing Production Glowing
Production Population Population Overloading
Population Rising Population Ruining
Rising Tides Ruining Sky
Tides Freeze Skys Fall
Failing Metal Failing People
Failing Metal Failing Steeple
Title: Where are these bipeds going?
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Added: 03-21-2008
Channel: Writing
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Mar 21, 2008 - 20:06 PM
I like the use of repition. Good poem.

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